so the concept is good , the detail you put into your web demo shows but the poster above it needs help, the graphic is over done and relates little info about the actual tub which should be your main concern, I think with a little more thought you can have some nice promo material.
I like your idea of making the tub fun and versatile for the crazy and busy lifestyles of a twenty something year old. My only concern with some of your designs, is watch the type you use. Especially on the bottom one (the one with the man relaxing in the tub) the background behind the wording makes it very difficult to read. Try lowering the transparency on the bubbles so it's barely a hint of bubbles. Play around with the type as well, a serif font doesn't scream youthful it speaks more sophisticated. Your re-design is about fun and youthfulness so maybe a non serif font with some color. Try looking at some magazine ads and posters online and at the book store to give you some idea/inspiration of what kind of look and feel is already out there, grabbing the attention of your target audience. Research can help wonders. Good luck with everything. I look forward to seeing your whole design put together next week.
so the concept is good , the detail you put into your web demo shows but the poster above it needs help, the graphic is over done and relates little info about the actual tub which should be your main concern, I think with a little more thought you can have some nice promo material.
ReplyDeleteI like your idea of making the tub fun and versatile for the crazy and busy lifestyles of a twenty something year old. My only concern with some of your designs, is watch the type you use. Especially on the bottom one (the one with the man relaxing in the tub) the background behind the wording makes it very difficult to read. Try lowering the transparency on the bubbles so it's barely a hint of bubbles. Play around with the type as well, a serif font doesn't scream youthful it speaks more sophisticated. Your re-design is about fun and youthfulness so maybe a non serif font with some color. Try looking at some magazine ads and posters online and at the book store to give you some idea/inspiration of what kind of look and feel is already out there, grabbing the attention of your target audience. Research can help wonders. Good luck with everything. I look forward to seeing your whole design put together next week.
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